get your own ideas
this was totally ripped from Knoxs Korner, because not only does he design his characters in this fashion but most of his scenarios are start off almost exactly like this. i would have pulled a whistle blow but since this isnt a copy paste of one of his videos i cant. clearly your a fan but come up with something that is your own. and you made this 20 crap pile repeat. AND YOU EVEN SPELL IT LIKE HE DOES!