Hey guys, this is my first real short I've made, it was a project for class and I decided to make it based on one of my old comics that I made when I was 10, that's why the ending is so short and sudden. I did it on paper first and then redid it in flash., I hope you enjoy Bill's shenanigans! I did everything except the music!
great job
I have to say that I like that you have a pretty good script to this animation ajavascript:submission_controller.Get ReviewController().SaveReview();nd the drawings of the characters look decent.
I think that maybe the background and the voices could be better but you will figure that out in time as you are young and have time to do that.
Keep up the great work ! 5/5 from me
Wow thanks! : D I was never good with backgrounds XD I'm working on it! Thanks for being nice to me! : D
At last
An actual short that you made aside from Hat Girl and Raccoon. Since it's an animated version of your old comics, it very well composed and the punch lines are fluent and objective. Try it again and this time, come up with something new.
Haha yeah XD' Raccoon and Hatgirl are almost over actually, so after I put up the last one all my new stuff will be new stuff XD' Thanks for watching my stuff! : D
It was cute.
I really like the facial animations.
Thanks! : D