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Well done. You have just clicked on a 20 second long piece of crap. Enjoy it. It is my first animation, so leave any constructive criticism you can below.

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Nice!

For your first animation, it's pretty good! Although the ending was a bit random. But it's very impressive nonetheless!



short but eh

lolz u know that actually kind of made me chuckle at the end there where the guys says "u okay then?" Dunno, I mean for a first flash this isn't bad at all when you look at the graphics and little bit of animation, you need to improve on the length before any constructive criticism can really be given. So next time just make something longer.



haha

i was expecting the guy to pull a Peter Griffin. this is your first animation? its really good man you got potential keep it up!



Nice!

Great for your first movie keep up the good work!
Also it's A little bit random :D



You were right.

This IS a 20 second piece of crap. The kind of stuff I hate seeing in the portal. Seriously, there is nothing in this noteworthy. You didn't even finish the punchline, just put in a interrupting Godzilla.

But hey, you could try doing something with this. Clean it up, actually give it a joke, I dunno. Nah, I'm being soft, it's junk.


UnseenToast responds:

It sure is a piece of crap :D
I've got something that I think is much better and serious on the way though.

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Jun 12, 2011
1:22 PM EDT
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