The animation's alright

Hey.

Get back from the microphone it sounds like you are too close. Either that, or use a higher quality microphone.

The end screen goes by to fast to read, and it would be better if the movie didn't suddenly repeat.

Regarding your comment:
"... uploading it to Newgrounds so I have a way to access it..."

If your main purpose is simply to access it from an online source, then a file hosting service is much better. I recommend something like MediaFire, as you can set up a free account to store your files. (:

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- Ziro out.