feel's like watching a noir detective cartoon show
i love the art still, and the story. very dark and old. just great. the voice acting was just top notch ;) very very BIG! 10/10 5/5 ;) you deservedly buddy :D
loved it but
the ending is predictable.
The whole short was nice, but the beginning was pretty rocky, especially with the really crappy voice acting on Katelyn's part. Perfect voice or not, she's not good at acting. The rest was okay, though the job for the Don bit pretty big, too.
The animation is good, if a tad grainy, and the story's plot development fit nicely into the alotted time. Nice work and good ending, I say.
Just try to get your VAs to practice their parts more next time. Please.
Ive watched this 5 times now! 10/10 5/5
i wish this was ongoing.
i like the concept and characters. even if you don't win the final round, you should keep this flash going. Get more authentic with the music (the credits sounded like a funk soundtrack to a 70's cop drama) and noire feel and you got yourself a hit series