Pretty good
I liked the part where the main guy smacked his cock back and forth, lol.
Author Comments
This is about Mac, MiserableMac. He's a peculiar fellow; hyper smart and stuff, he enjoys spending his time in a lab he built in his basement testing out different concoctions. But Mac can't do that all day, he's a freshmen in high school, with is buddy Sam he's gonna have to survive the day to day life of a teenager, plus all the other stuff that goes along with that.
Hi everyone, this is PRIME here, just letting you know that I finally finished this animation! wahoo! honestly I don't quite know how I managed to spend this much time on it, a full year, way too much procrastination on my part. The worst part of it all is that I'm not even that pleased with how this turned out, mainly because of the script writing I did, after watching this a couple time I realized that it wasn't a good script to tell a story, which is what I'm trying to do. Regardless of weather it's good or not, I don't care, it was a huge learning experience for me, I can tell I've learned a lot, looking at the beginning of the cartoon to the end my animations have greatly improved. As I plan out the second part of cartoon I plan on continuing to improve my skills. So enjoy it or don't I don't care too much, but don't be mean!
One more thing... sorry about the file size, I don't know why it's so huge.
Thanks a bunch, until next time, PRIME.
great start ^^
nice animation, story is interesting and easy to swallow, the beginning kindda strange where he blew to sky and into friends home , might need to get real female for the female character , this could turn into a great series :p
it rub of as a calm and peacefull story....the title miserable mac sounds horrible than it portray.
keep doing this animations, i like them :P
10 for Mac and 10 for You :P
Solid
I've gotta say, the art was quite good, even if the animation was choppy at times, or the pacing was out of whack. As far as voice acting goes, I'm going to have to agree with a bit more emphasis, and maybe another voice or two for side characters (it seemed to me like the principle was just a really tired you). Story was decent, but overall, fairly pleasing to watch.
Alright
The animation was nice, really fluid.
I liked the style and the drawing, both the detailed and non-detailed drawings.
Maybe it was a little bit too fast paced at times, and slow paced at others, but I just noticed this maybe 2 or 3 times, nothing really important.
My only real complain is the story, maybe it could have used a little bit more 'funnyness'. I know you tried, but I didn't feel motivated to laugh, just to release a little chuckle at times.
Anyway, overall, I think it was a great animation. Kudos!
Looking forward to any other project from you.
