don't give up! i liked a lot this video! it was so funny!
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Okay, I'm at my home now, I uploaded this in my other house, but not in the province, forgive and try to understand that. Unable to put quality buttons, so not recommended for slow computers. And I can't make a cave so big to let Patapons go back to that cave over and over, and this is just a movie, don't think of it as a game too.
Part 2?
hey, looking for voice over work for part 2? im your guy... I can do all the voices
SuperMarioFan9000 responds:
Yes, but not all words just you know reactions of the characters, if they are shocked, I'll play the shocked sound effect (VOICE)
four words
turn, up, the, framerate
I liked it, but it was quite slow.
good story and everthing though
SuperMarioFan9000 responds:
it's 24 fps already... Still because I tried the movement normally slow.
Really good
On every flash your improving better.keep up the good work.
Not like the Patapon genre.
Instead of writing whole sentences, I'll tell you the good stuff (+) and what could have been done better (-) in the flash:
+ Used Ton, Chin, Kan which are their real names (many people forget).
+ Used some music.
+ An Archfiend attacks the Patapon tribe directly, a little twist!
- Poor animation, nothing special.
- No voice-acting (yes, I watched your flash from start to finish and saw that you needed someone to play the Patapons).
- You haven't caught the Patapon genre well. Rottenlee Ravenous looks more like a bird and the Patapons doesn't talk like that. Where's the Hero Portal, Barracks, Team Totem etc? Also, some words used, most likely, doesn't even exist in the Patapon world!
- The title is blue and red colored.. that doesn't indicate Patapon, right?
Overall, 1/10 stars and 1/5 Pico's. However, I know you could have done better. Show me that in your next flash! :)
SuperMarioFan9000 responds:
I didn't put Team Totem, Barracks, cause that will take more time, letting the Patapons go back to one place over and over, thanks, In the Patapon games, there they have speech Balloons, and can ask anything. Oh and that wasn't an Archfiend, it's a Demon, Elemental Demon. Related to an Archfiend.
