it's really nice
nice story, even without a good animation, you could do something great, congratulations
For a first try this is really good
Despite its lack of color, its really good. Based on this I could expect to see cartoons from you in the future. The transitions are good, animation is clever.
Alright. It's cute and funny. But a level of comedy like this (witch isn't that high)should be given animations of the same rate. I think thats all thats missing. Oh and some better music, too.
s'alright i guess
i dont like it, make animations smoother, make music better, make vid more interesting, real eye-sore too.