looks good
I love sprite movies, but I have never seen a one piece one. Also I hope there will be action in a second trailer
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This is the preview to a series of movies I am creating involving the manga/anime, One Piece. There isn't much to this mainly because it is just a preview but I hope you enjoy and it gets you excited for the series to actually begin. Also, you can expect Episode 1 to come out some time this summer.
Nothing going on
An action would have really shown what you could do.
It's quite good...
I'm giving you a seven, because this trailer doesn't really make us that excited to see it. You need to add more of the action scene. Take the anime called 'Detective Conan' for example. In the Movie 15 Trailer, they include the theme song, all of the main characters, action scenes and of course a scene where the main character almost dies. I know that's a different anime, but you should at least do some of it.
Example:
Luffy sitting at the front of the boat and his crew him. All of them are smiling, until a massive shadow shockwave comes from the island. Luffy and his crew fades out into darkness and then a short action scene fades in as the theme song starts to play. It shows Blackbeard and his crew beating up the Navy. Then a flash and then it shows Luffy close up with the same injured look as he got from Lucci. Then he can say, 'I will defend my crew no matter what!' to Blackbeard who shows little injury. Sudden whiteness then Title comes in from the whiteness. Whiteness fades, then a little after that the title fades. Then a little scene when Luffy uses a massive jet gattling gun (his attack) against a massive shadowy shockwave caused by Blackbeard engulfing the whole island.
You can use this idea if you want. It might be better than the trailer you have now and it might be a little harder to animated. Well, maybe not a little.
Kflame responds:
Im actually thinking of releasing a second trailer to show off more of the battles and stuff in the movies
Seems promising.
As this is only a preview, I won't give it that high a score. As a fan of One Piece, I find it sad that there isn't that many OP flashes here, so I am looking forward to seeing what you can do with the series.
Sense this is simply a fan creation I won't be too critical if some things don't make sense (like one of the silhouettes being a certain someone who is in space at the moment), but I won't be too nice. Anyways, I'm expecting a lot from this series.