my favourite part was when the soldier said "i would eat your corpse" that line of the animation was brilliant
I love how the humor progressed, it started out boring, but got interesting when it turned to corpes...
Nom the Corpse of Thine Enemyyyy
This was really funny. I liked the bit around half way through with the nyan invader flying by in the mid background; that quick fly by and in-and-out audio while they were seemingly oblivious was pretty funny.
I gave this a 9 rather than a full 10 because I think the dialogue/runtime could have been condensed a bit without losing humour, and because towards the end the voices seemed to change. I don't know if this was due to you recording most of the voice audio in one go, then taking a break and not being able to get the same levels or recreate the voices you'd originally come up with; but it kind of threw me and made it hard to concentrate on the animation and jokes for a few seconds - which is something you'll obviously want to avoid.
Great job overall!
Yeah, there was a reason behind the audio issue... After animating up to that I point I realised the ending needed to be rerecorded and also noticed at that point that my microphone had been on a different setting, hence the ending sounds a bit nicer... However still noticeably different
nyan cat are as evil as we thought
I love Nyan cat related stuff and this is something new. The idea is great, the speach is well written, and the audio is good enough to keep me watching. The end made me laugh.
I like the colors and drawings, the mouths are well synced. But it has space to be better in every way. But I made my day. 5/5 8/10