I thought it was pretty good. A couple things stood out to me, however. In the beginning, the voice was really clear, which is good, but some of the sounds were too sharp, as if your mouth was too close to the microphone, or it didn't have a cover on it. But other than that it was pretty good! I was actually looking forward to the rest of the plot, and the conversation about FF5 actually made me laugh. Good work!
happy lock day
nicely done flash but whats the name of the song in the outro?
It's Pain For Pleasure by Sum 41, enjoy.