just the way it was. just a lot more different levels. dont add all the flash and abilities that a lot of people want. then itll be just another game.
At first i thought "oh dear..." but after a few levels i started to enjoy it, the commentary really tickled me. Parts of the game was quite tricky which was needed, considering that the first 5 or so levels were so easy. All in all great little game.
Love it but it needs a save feature
I loved the presentation of this game. The voice work was excellent. The narration of the story, the sound effects, and the death/try again scenes made it seem like someone was reading a book to me. The gameplay and level design was inventive for such a simplistic design and the graphics fit very well. The story was alright. It just seemed like you could have done more with it, however, the storytelling was also well done.
Overall, this was a very creative work and I hope that you can build on it in your future work, which I look forward to seeing.