I'm yet to remain convinced...
I have watched your video from start to end, and I can safely say that all you managed to make is numerous connections between various entities without substantiating any of them, therfore failing to making any point whatsoever. You need to provide evidence for all your connections, to say why they're all relevant to the point you're making (that this flower of life is key to everything.)
For example you make the claim that this pattern has been found in multiple locations without corroberating this 'fact' with several other sources (e.g. journals, books, magazines, websites, etc.) You also state that everything is geometric, so therefore creation is geometric, again without any evidence for such a connection to exist. Stating facts (even ones that seem to be common knowledge) without sourcing your material is VERY bad science, and nowadays there isn't a generally recognised scientific document out there that doesn't have a bibliography at the end of it.
Another thing I don't like about this presentation is that it is all over the place, referencing lessons you previously covered or have yet to even cover, and it bombarded me with periodic tables, photos, diagrams and other miscellaneous pictures without any clear reason for them being there (aside from a cursory reference from the narrator.) And it all goes by so fast! I barely had a chance to recognise what I was seeing or hearing before the movie barreled headlong into the next point, making it a struggle to keep up. Needless to say I didn't enjoy watching it.
So, in short, although I can see you have put alot of effort into it, that effort hasn't been put into all the right places. The presentation needs a little work, and you need to put a lot more effort into sourcing all the material you use.