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May 23, 2011 | 9:07 AM EDT

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well. hello newgrounds. this is my first ever flash film. I need peoples feed back on what to work on. and if you could include a different or better type of flash program that a noobie like me could use. then please add it to the review. thank you.

P.S. please be constructive. I realize that this is not that good, but you could give me something to work on.

5 minutes after submitting this submission, I actually checked on it. apologies. the flash came out wrong.



Rated 1.5 / 5 stars


Looks like you were just screwing around an put this up, but thats cool, looked good, looks like you could do something pretty cool if you put the time into it, I'd give it a higher score but that doesn't seem fair to the other people i've given 5 to 10's looks like the frame rate was going really fast too, like the motions you were trying to make happened a little faster than they should have


Rated 3 / 5 stars


good one


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Excellent movie!!

Silly and short!!!


Rated 2 / 5 stars

Nice start

I like the style of the intro it was very simple, but somehow you managed to make it look good and the drawing style is interesting, but it was too short, it sudennly stopped, You should be more accurate when morphing, try to respect the proportions, the head was normal then it sudennly got big than small again, and the size of the whole body also. The morphing was too fast, I couldn't understand anything, it should be longer and refined(adding more frames will make it look a lot better, though it's a pain in the ass). There was no storyline, no introduction. The action started too fast, there had to be an introduction.
The intro is what I like the most in the flash, since I din't understand the part with the transforming character. A good first attempt, keep it up.

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Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

You need to work, but you'll get it.

When importing pictures to flash, you should be sure it's centered on the white square, wich represent your canva.

The drawing are good, but to get to something interesting, you should work on a story. So maybe you'll have to minimize the details on your drawing to allow you more time to make more frames.

Last thing. You should had a play button. Even though your movie's short, the looping sound is quite ennoying when writting a review. If you can't creat a play button by yourself, just download one from newgrouns (in the Downloads section, right under NG's logo).

Good luck with your futur animations.

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