needs to be longer
put in more work
Not rlly an animation
experimental or not, limited animation to me r not rlly an animation.
u could have a rlly decent animation going on here if u spend more time to do a frame by frame animation...
overall, i like the idea, but the shortness of the clip did not back up by decent animation or artwork. do more practice! :)
I'm not sure if you realize this...But this is the practice?
Far too short.
Considering that it says part 1 on the title you could've waited until you finished part
2 and put them together to make it a little bit longer.
There could've been more animation to it.
It just felt rushed.
Keep on practicing.
Though I agree with my fellow reviewers on the animation and the length of the flash, I think that you are doing a great job. Keep working on the overall "fluidity" of your work and I am sure it will go far.
Sad animation... But I like the music