needs to be longer
put in more work
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Gonzo the grunt is just trying to get some snacks out of the vending machine and BAm! He gets kidnapped by terrorists.
Not rlly an animation
experimental or not, limited animation to me r not rlly an animation.
u could have a rlly decent animation going on here if u spend more time to do a frame by frame animation...
overall, i like the idea, but the shortness of the clip did not back up by decent animation or artwork. do more practice! :)
Schutkid responds:
I'm not sure if you realize this...But this is the practice?
Far too short.
Considering that it says part 1 on the title you could've waited until you finished part
2 and put them together to make it a little bit longer.
There could've been more animation to it.
It just felt rushed.
Keep on practicing.
Though I agree with my fellow reviewers on the animation and the length of the flash, I think that you are doing a great job. Keep working on the overall "fluidity" of your work and I am sure it will go far.
JF
Could of been good
If it wasn't so damn short!
