My suggestion is to show the gals you hook up with the cartoon porn you're making.
Hitting the register and making all the profanity indecipherable is far more annoying and will never be funny.
Pick up the tempo, too. Go through a harried set of emotions, not just frustration and resentment. If you want this stuff to be wild and blown out of proportion, you have to shake up the performance a lot more.
The art direction is the last thing you should worry about. Having to include the likeness of a random viewer may absorb more time than what you're willing to spend.
I've seen better cartoons, so take my recommendations into consideration and your next effort will be better received.