LEGO Land Ep. 1

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EDIT 2/2/17: Since I've released this series combined into one video along with a new soundtrack, I've gone and updated the NG versions of these with the new soundtrack and whatever other differences there are between the original uploads and the new versions. This was mostly for the removal of copyrighted audio, which has been a controversial thing on Newgrounds lately, but there were also a few timing issues originally, and I've added clearer subtitles to the first part. While it is nice to have a much more fitting soundtrack and to be able to see this in wide screen and just slightly better overall, this does mean that there's really no way to see the original versions of this series anymore, as they were originally removed from youtube for copyrighted music, and now the same has happened on Newgrounds. It's not like it was relying on the music though, it was just there to be there, so no harm has come from this. If anything, I think the new soundtrack IMPROVES this. That's not really for me to judge though. Why am I even typing this? It's not like anyone even cares about this series or is even gonna find it.

Also, since I Just rendered off the individual parts from the master file for all of them as a single video, this means that the original credits have also been removed. That's not really much of a problem though, 'cause who wants to sit through that, right? Part 10 still has credits though, but that's 'cause it's the credits for the whole thing, and the end just kinda works better with credits, I think.

Also also I've gone and replaced those shitty short descriptions with better ones that actually tease the events of the episode. Again though, not like anyone cares.


Air Prelude Kevin MacLeod (incompetech.com)
Licensed under Creative Commons: By Attribution 3.0 License

The other song is some track that was included in RPG Maker XP, so I'm gonna assume it's free to use.


Welcome to the first episode of Lego Land: The First chapter! If this one does well, I'll upload the other 9 parts. As you can see by that, umm.... date, this was made well over a year ago. So please, if you leave a review, don't say anything like "get a new camera" or "the quality sucks"; I kind of know, plus the quality and story (and motion) get better in each episode. The quality isn't good until the final one, but it's still decent up until then, so be patient and hopefully you will follow the series.


MistyEntetainment told me to check this out. As an aspiring stop-motion animator, i couldn't resist. this was real interesting, some neat storytelling going on here. I love the unfitting Evanescence song, I probably laughed harder than I should have.

in the beginning with the note that the Lego guy read, writing it with a moderately thin Sharpie would've worked and I see that because of the camera quality that you had to actually go in Flash and re-write the text with the brush tool. it doesn't look good. some of ti was downright illegible

yep, the song you chose isn't very suiting to a fight scene. i understand you have limited resources and all, but no music would've been better. also you can just get your music off YouTube or download music from the Audio Portal. look up "show no tears" by NemesisTheory. it's really good for that kind of scene and it sounds awesome to boot

i can see some marginal improvement in episodes 3 and 4. mainly because you used a computer to overlay text instead of writing it yourself and ripping it out and holding it manually. i'm glad you fixed this, especially since in my first paragraph i covered the illegibility issue

first episodes are probably one of the most important episodes of any show - they attract an audience and a potential demographic and if it's poorly done then you'll have to rely on somebody finding a later, better episode and that can really be bad since the plot will appear very disoriented. usually first episodes contain an organized setup of the protagonists that the show will center on for the next 9 parts.

even with limited equipment, tbh this could've been executed better. i can understand starting late in the story and then it evolving into a bigger storyline with more tension and characters that have depth

i think that's what you were going for here, but when it hit the credits it felt very disorienting and jumbling. i know you can't fix this since you already did this almost three years ago but i'll still cover this topic in case you ever decide to make another series or for whatever reason.

overall, this was disorienting and sub-par for a first episode, but this doesn't deserve a 1.47. good luck on your future endeavors

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artistunknown responds:

Again thank you. I have know clue what I was thinking when I had used paper for text. I guess originally I wasn't going to edit them into video, I don't really remember, but yeah.
There is some back story to it, not much but some. I'll admit, this isn't a very good thing for a first episode (it's a reoccurring thing I see in my work is the first episode is usually the worst...). Yeah, I do plan to have some stuff after part 10, this story line is concluded, but this is only a small part in the big picture. I've had a script for a "chapter 2" sitting on my computer since maybe late 2010, early 2011. I haven't had time to get any work done on it, but I really need to. It's going to be far superior to anything else I've ever done, and the production values will be great (since I've improved over the years, I have an editor that uses Sony Vegas pro, so tons of fancy edits there). Well, I'm glad you're staying true to your word, and actually watching all of these. Part 10 is definitely something to look forward to, it's 7 minutes long, scripted, and it looks great, hopefully the file size isn't going to kill me... Well, hopefully parts 5 and 6 should be up tomorrow, and hopefully I see more of your reviews.


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firslt the camera was out of focus on at least 90% of the frames also i could bearly read a thing and maybe sound but iwasn't too bad

artistunknown responds:

Yeah, the camera is really out of focus. I hadn't learned about macro mode at the time, so the quality doesn't get really good 'til episode 10. But it's still decent in 2 through 8, and a little better in 9. The text gets better and actually readable (most of the time) in 2 through 8, then 9 and 10 actually have voices, plus sound effects, so if you follow the series, then you have that to look forward to.

nice but...

you need a fast frame rate, it just a little to slow

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artistunknown responds:

Yeah... this was made a while ago, and not many pictures were taken, so it is a little choppy. Animation get's better throughout episodes.

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1.43 / 5.00

May 17, 2011
7:28 PM EDT