For your first time, that's pretty decent. It ain't bad, and it definitely made me chuckle at more than a few parts. (Like the "You butt-fag. >:(", mostly 'cause I'm immature. XD)
To me as a viewer, there were a few issues though, mainly in the sound of it all. Certain things were louder and/or quieter than others, and certain sounds/voices contained clipping. (i.e., popped or "fizzled" distortion due to overdriven volume.) If I recall, a large majority of those issues could be solved (at least somewhat) in an audio editing program such as GoldWave or Audacity.
The only other issue I had was the quality. Is the microphone you were using any good? If so, then it really is such a horrible scene when potential voice acting is hindered by a sub-par microphone. Then again, I understand issues when it comes to obtaining one.
Still, like I said, for your first submission it wasn't at all bad; the animations weren't horrible, the jokes/comedy worked, and we could at least make out what you were saying. It can only get better from here, right?
Good work, man. ;D
The mic wasn't professional. But i did use audacity. Thanks for the tips.
Not too shabby
As others and you as well have said, the voice acting isn't really good. Especially on the news part, where I still don't know what the guy sez.
The part I DID understand was very good though, I liked the timing of the humor and how the pitch goes up when he gets upset and stuff.
Drawing wasn't really special (kinda like mine tbh :D), but it really fit the whole thing so I dont think that's a bad thing really.
Just please give it a listen before you upload the next, really looking forward to seeing more.
Lol, he said "Sh*t the fu*k". thanks for watchin.
and it keeps continuing!! skrw psn. But at least we get some kinda welcome-back gift, which allows us to download free game content yaaay. So a few more weeks.
x-box players up yours
Haha, thats the spirit!
Could improve voice acting.
Funny because it's true, and nice to see the world expressing their anger through Flash, as stated above though, I could barely make out what you were saying. Just hope PSN is up soon.
Of course it can be better
but I found that funny, maybe not hilarious but better than a lot of submissions on here, if this is your first time, it's better than other people's 10th time.