Has Serious Flaws
Your animation is okay. Quite good still and line work in fact- I liked your drawing style. That being said, your voice acting was atrocious. The two primarily introduced characters sounded like the same being. The british orc goblin fuckoff thing sounded like a bad joke. I'm as big of a Dr. Shroud fan as anyone, but this level of production quality doesn't deserve the front page of newgrounds.
Also, the plot is completely contrived, almost as bad as a videogame. Hurr Durr here is a map with 7 red skull waypoints to it that we will stop by "much like levels", and we can only see through it was a key! I love fantasy. Good fantasy. This is not good fantasy. I didn't love it.
Keep the work up. And the writing. And the Voice Acting.