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EVolution ep2

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This one took way too long.

Really getting into extended universe stuff here. So Trox, Xleek's boss, is angry because Xleek let two "ancient" humans on the Time Machine. (They're from the future, watch the first episode to get the whole story.) He hesitantly lets them stay, but Meredith comes in with two more primitive humans. THEY SHALL NOT STAY.

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Sweetness

sweet not awesome like the first one but sweet. you did the explain everything with a conversation trick, which by the way i do all the time in stories that i write but dont have enough time to finish. but you did bring up new questions. the rest was quick and amusing. the voices were a little strange not sure what was wrong with the audio. the music was a little to loud near the end, was having a hard time hearing the voices.



Excellent

Great series, love your work, and I look forward to more!

You need to get yourself some more voice actors, though, I think. Or, at least clear up the speech of the "future humans", because I found a couple of Trox and Xleek's lines a bit garbled...

Fantastic, other than that! :)



awesome but

that lady scares me.



Great graphics, and cool story.

I liked the style of it, and it gave me a few laughs. It was pretty good but not as involving as I would like it to be.


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May 6, 2011
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