Well... that was... ok?
I can see that you had to work really hard on this since you only had 3 days. And i like it that you actually finished the animation before you upload it to Newgrounds. That shows dadication.
Also, i would like to ask you something.
i really loved Maximillion Bagsworth and when i saw in the "Author Comments" that you wanted to make a serie out of this, i was thrilled! I guess you have alot going on in your life or something but i would like to take this moment to remember you what you had promised. Well that's it old chump.
It's going to be! I've got the storyboard finished in all but, you are right, I've been pretty dang busy the past...year? Dang, that's a while.
I plan to make a comeback, though, when Bonehead Halloween II comes out this October. When that happens, expect my next project to be Maximillion Bagsworth II, hands down.
Gosh SO many mouths!
Hot damn, that's a lot of mouths to draw!! Haha
I might've drawn that much in my past animations, though I've never taken the time to count.
Having said that, the way you do mouths is pretty interesting and unique! Although eventually frame by frame might bore you out. It did with me, and I do about half reusing mouths and have frame by frame.
Also, your mouth syncing is superb, I think it'd be even better looking if you made chins go down with the talking as well. it's a pain though, as I have to do that with my Kolawskum characters who has a beak..thing. lol XD
The backgrounds were nice and simple, and I liked the colors you used.
Overall pretty awesome! And interesting enough to watch the whole way through so nice job! :D
Thanks a bunch, Onions!
I was absolutely DREADING the mouths by the way.
I animated all the motions first, and then I was like, "...crap wait, people have mouths. Kill me."
Dillon: Got eleven kills then called in the dogs to wipe out the Viet Congs.
Casey: Then they retreated and that was cool, we went back to camp to look for the pool.
Dillon: There wasn't a pool.
Casey: Oh yeah, camp sucked.
P.S. If I have mistaked something, Its not really a big deal.
P.S.S. 10/10 5/5
Pretty good by regular flash standards but pretty amazing for a 3 day school project. Like all of your animations it was pretty smooth and had amazing lip-syncing.
That Didn't Suck!
... Yes, yes it did.
Although personally, not really, fairly good for three days. I like the rhyming... and use of a literary term. Good animation and original music, so I had a swell time watching!