The animation was par, the voices were meh, and this was an original rip from VGCats. Other than that it was better than your previous work and your improvement should be commended.
Seriously though, make your own stuff and stop taking other peoples crap to be funny. Seeing the comic brought to life was actually worse than the strip.
I find the comics to be wittier.
Something about yelling and chaos just doesn't work for me unless its well thought out.
I cast flare!
These jokes sound like they were taken from Unforgotten Realms, It's funny, but unoriginal. Great animation though. -2 for poor voice acting on the female character, - 2 for lack of originality. The female character under did her part, when you hear something like "You all f*cking drop dead!" usually they'd sound a whole lot angrier than that, it didn't sound believable.
You shouldn't get mad at people for giving your animation low scores for the lack of original content, that's the whole point of Newgrounds in the first place and usually those are the things that get frontpaged. You however have been lucky, at least it's good enough to make it there right?
She's worse than him!
the funny part is that the boy-cat is having fun, which is what he was supposed to do, and the girl cat is just a terrible terrible DM that does literally everything wrong :p
if your players are noobs, you might aswell give them a starter kit.
if they cant handle a dire rat, why send one after them?
maybe she should teach the basic basics first against something that doesnt murder them?
and then she inexplicably kills the rat for them? what the hell?
if your players think its fun tie a rat to their stick, why wouldnt she let them?
they can do whatever they want, it's DND and noobs want to and should be allowed to do exactly that kind of thing!
but no. she gets totally immature and kills her players off, concluding her unmitigated failure as a Dungeon Master
animation was allright, and im glad you're expanding to flash videos, although
i think you need to sharpen up on how to make jokes funny in a new medium.
the jokes might have been funnier in comic form but i thought they were mediocre at best in the way they were executed.
try improving on things like timing and camera utilisation.
overall it was allright i suppose, but certainly not great.
keep it up, though!