I'll admit it was pretty good...
But the voice actors need a lot more conviction in the dialogue, especially the female actress. Also, I would suggest adding more scenes onto the original scenes.
why limit yourself?
what's with the panel to panel "adaptation", frankly this is rather pointless especially since everything here's basically traced from the original comic
so i guess the only original thing here is the added voices but then again its a word for word script so two stars for that, i kinda wish that you could have traced the background better but i guess you can only get as much you take
as much as you defend yourself this isn't a parody or adaptive work of any kind, its a direct rippoff
looks like my friends playing RPG...
it makes me angry... but it's ok, 10! o/
Autumn has a lovely voice!
I cast flare!
These jokes sound like they were taken from Unforgotten Realms, It's funny, but unoriginal. Great animation though. -2 for poor voice acting on the female character, - 2 for lack of originality. The female character under did her part, when you hear something like "You all f*cking drop dead!" usually they'd sound a whole lot angrier than that, it didn't sound believable.
You shouldn't get mad at people for giving your animation low scores for the lack of original content, that's the whole point of Newgrounds in the first place and usually those are the things that get frontpaged. You however have been lucky, at least it's good enough to make it there right?