Love it!
Every second of it was funny, well animated, and probational! Good choice in music, character, and script! Off to go watch everything els you have made! Keep up the good work!
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IMPORTANT!
Play the game first!!! http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/545778
here is the youtube version
http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=h9t-ppshxPA
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After a stressful two weeks, i have finally finished the first episode!
note: the audio is a tiny bit out of sync but its not that big of a deal
please review and comment and ill make more.
Nice...
Work a little in the art and good luck in episode 2!
Potential
The humor is there, but the pacing is awkward and it takes away from flash. I chuckled at "YOU! BITCHFACE!" The absurdity is very tasteful, and I enjoyed the the voice acting and plot. If you could work on the pacing of the dialogue, as well as the transitions between scenes, you'd have a fantastic flash. I'll follow the series, I hope to enjoy more submissions.
CallumBowen responds:
thanks for the review! ill keep in mind about the pacing in the future :)
