the cartoon was funny in its simplicity. the animations were a little strange, yet judging by the fluidity, I think you did that on purpose. well done. just the thing is that the sound effect was annoying. only thing to watch out for.
Short but funny, The art was fairly basic but it suited the animation and the storyline, it was funny even though it was very short. I hope to see more animations from you in future.
Nice, short flash
It was a nice short. I would maybe suggest music. But this was great,