Im new to flash so yeah
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Meh
It isn't bad, just not good enough to be Newgrounds material. Newgrounds is about cool stuff and comedy with flash. It looks somewhat cool, but isn't interesting or anything. A simple storyline would have done the job, with stick figures if you really need to. I don't create flash because I can't do much better than this video, so I stick with voice acting and creating the story. Don't let this review discourage you though, I just don't think that this is for Newgrounds.
Yeah this is old ive gotten much much better.
are you useing the latest flash?
im pritty fair your new we were all new at one point this was obviosly a test to see how good you were at fist and not bad but it looks like your useing an old flash program. if you ever want to work with some one im available and i mite be able to convince the famouse mr-shark to help to, yeah he is famouse.
its vectorian giotto. its the same thing as flash. i asked for help from people who use flash and it worked. it has the same everything it is possible adobe made it. Yeah im pretty sure they did unless they should be sued for copying off of flashcs4. Its a new version its bad quality because i hyper camed it. It wont let me save it as a SWF file on there. So i hyper cammed it and imported it into avs video editor and produced it as a SWF file. And i would like to work with you. And if you could get MR. shark to help me. Awesome!
Waay to short
I understand you're new, so that's why we (the community of Newgrounds) are here to help you along your merry way. You need to try making the picture clearer, for one. Another thing is to make something more than just a moving line.
How could i make the picture clearer? I use a SWF file. (of course haha) thanks for the review.
Testing?
You should make it "morph" into something exotic before ot ends. Even if u cant make i longer, then squeeze it in to the little video. Even if its a test, because u clearly stated u were knew.
I can make it as long as i wanted to lol. Yeah im new. Thanks for the review.
Umm...
not long...
try a different flash programmer!
I could've made it longer. Im new to flash. I just made a NG yesterday. a different programmer has nothing to do with this.