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A Paper Mario Story

rated 3.16 / 5 stars
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Apr 27, 2011 | 1:06 AM EDT

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*Update* Holy crap guys, 3.56?! :D That's my best score so far, thanks!

Well this took awhile to write, and it actually has nothing to do with Mario, but I used the sprites from it so I guess that counts for something :P.

Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated.

Awesome guy is by Psycosis91
and Pokemon Tower Defense is by Olmate
*If you watch the movie it will all make since.

Also I know that the writing is really corny.

*Update* Here's the better version on youtube ( atch?v=XxoDR4u_c3Y)



Rated 4 / 5 stars

It was good.

I like the paper mario theme. I only wish the text would scroll faster. That's just me.

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SyuleeArbe responds:

Hmm, I'll make it so it scrolls faster when you press a button... Well time to learn some more AS!


Rated 3 / 5 stars

It's okay...

I'm sure once the plot shows itself it will be a lot more interesting.

SyuleeArbe responds:

Yeah this one was sort of just to introduce the characters and setting, so I could add on to it without having odd ends everywhere. I'm still pretty new to writing, but its a lot of fun.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

We dont take kindly the thieves 'round here

lol... very entertaining. Keep up the great work :D

- Faust

SyuleeArbe responds:

Haha, I'm glad you liked it. I'll try and make the next one even better. I was tempted to right this response in html, because I'm a rebel.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

It was okay

Story's not TOO bad, but I give it a 7 cuz of the music/sfx quality. I hope to see more of your work c:

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SyuleeArbe responds:

Ehhh, well that counts for something :D. I had to compress the sounds by a lot so it wouldn't be 10mb. Thanks for the review!