too bad its not animated but still nice drawn =)
Needs more nudity.
Seriously? One nipple? That's the extent of the adult content?
Anyway, nice artwork. I like the style.
And the swearing, it's better to warn people about one nipple than to not warn them at all.
I liked it a lot, can't wait for you to follow it up
Never seen a web comic on newgrounds, I'm actually looking forward to seeing the next issue. Good dialog btw
The art work Is nice but it needs to be worked on a bit, the people seemed ok but you may wana practise drawing there faces more cause the faces didnt seem to fit together sometimes. You might wana have someone else write the dialogue cause yours was pretty bad. The nudity is ok to have but usual it leads to people wantng you to draw your people naked or bumping uglys with somthing else so becareful with it, unless you want this to be a bit pornoghraphic. The story you may wana have somone check it cause all we know is that the green chick is looking for a tomb, while you got a cop doing his thing. You probably should have stayed with one character longer to give some knowledge on them. Unless your trying to go for a certain type of opening that
will make sense later, but still someone should check it first.