So, for my Newgrounds debut I present you with a commercial that features an explosion, cutting edge graphics and an fat ginger with low self-esteem. As this is my first rodeo I'm more than eager to take any advice you can give.
I wanted to do something kinda easy so I Decided to Skim through some of the audio portal's voice acting files when I came across PMK's "Two Guns In A Can" so the credit for the audio really goes to him. i just made the "pretty" pictures to go with it.
Edit: Fixed the audio.
Super funny!
The drawing at the beginning looked kinda lazy, but I was wrong. The story, the animation, the audio worked together AWESOMELY! The randomness, the voice-acting, and even the little things like the guy with the gun looks at the 'camera' was very funny. Of course it can be improved here and there, with the some of the drawings and what not, but that is what the future is for! Hope to see more soon!
well i hope to make more soon :)
I was very lazy with the animation. next one will be better i promise you that.
Well...
... like the Idea of it, and for a Debut its pretty decent made,
nice voice acting an BGM, just the lil Problem that it is not in the BG....
Hope u can fix this =>
Keep up the nice Work, and send me one of those Cans, comes in handy sometimes ;D
not bad
the idea was really solid, which I liked, and it was actually kinda funny. you definitely need to work on your animation, especially the "can" it just looked like a circle with a dark grey L on it. as for the audio, yeah, the BGM is way too loud and drowns out the voices. open the file up in whatever sound editor you have and decrease the volume at least by 1/4. if you don't have a sound editor you can download Audacity for free.
Thanks I appreciate the advice. Apparently there are a couple issues with the audio. I'm gonna see what i can do about the levels th problem is that the music and voices are on the same file.
If only,
the audio wasn't behind it would have been gold.
huh, thats weird i don't see how that happened. i'm gonna see if i can fix that.
terrible
the audio was way off and you cant understand a word their saying
