Nice
I'm not going to say it's bad, but i've seen worse. Though since this is your first animation, i can't blame you. But if you're going to make another intro, how about adding some action, like having the heroes clash into Super Mecha Sonic (or Mettalix which some call it). That might add some excitement and also, even though I think it's fine, you should change the music and the way the characters are introduced at the start. That might help get views. But really, I think this is one of Top 20 best intros i've seen, and most people are lazy and don't bother making it look good. If you want ideas, you should look at Super Mario Bros Z or The Mushroom Hero series.