Finish it up...
...I think you're on to something here, what you've shown us with this is:
Seriously i can tell that even with this teaser you provided ((saying you put in just as much or more effort)) the main flash should be a smash. I hope you do go through with finishing it off, and i will be keeping tabs on this. I guess i'm pulling a Charles Dickens here with my 'Great Expectations' ((sorry for the bad pun but i've been forced to research that book recently and it's stuck in my head)) But i really think you could go far with what i've just seen.