Alot is wrong with this,
the animation was ok but could've been better the voice acting was pretty bad and didn't make me interested with the character I had more fun reading the comic then watching this, when a thomp falls they dont fall at a nice slow pace they are off screen in a second.
The voice acting, again was bad, thomps are rugged beings of stone. not "Hey Dave did you see that guy at starbucks yesterday.." Mario-cat sound like he was bored and couldn't understand him well. The biggest issue was the lip sync it was off in a lot of places and never really matched.
More on sound, there is a HUGE lack of background music, the mario bros castle theme should've been heard right off the bat, not dead silence for a few seconds then talking. Music is very important and should be used to the fullest in a movie, if you listen to it and hear nothing for more then a second add some music!
Your sound effects were off as well, when the hem-thomp hits the terrible squish soundeffect shoul've played before the other thomp sound played. a few split seconds yes, but attention to detail makes a good video. The scream didn't match at all, if your "voice actor" made that scream they need to not do it anymore, if not find a voice actor that know what there doing for your video. if you really want the current guy make him do more then 1 take of lines, have at least 5 different styles that way you can pick and choose.
I hope you will take these into consideration when you make a new video.
You've called attention to a lot of stuff i've overlooked. Thanks! The music was definitely missing, don't know how i screwed that up :P.
I do, however, collect more than one sample of lines from everyone who does this and i choose the ones i like best. If i don't like them, i splice the best parts of the lines and mush em together to make a good line.
Delete my previous post? HA!
Your animation is horrible and didn't do the original comic justice. Make your own work and not copy someone else's.
Good day, sir.
I did an animated adaptation of a webcomic... if you were looking for originality, you came to the wrong toon.
Standards here sure got low
That was 6/10 animation/art at best, but it was so short and pointless that the art and animation is irrelevant.
Why don't you make something original?
Wait... you get on the internet for a point?
anyway, this is an adaptation to a webcomic. originality seems a bit optional with this.
wow, i want my minutes back!
hum sorry vgcats in comic is better