A thwomp is made of rock, and it bleeds?
That is weird in my opinion, but you did a good job at least=)
that looked like it hurt..
It's still a little rough around the edges in comedy and voice work, but overall, you have potential.
Hope to see more from you soon.
this is halfway decent.
i enjoy the joke, painful though it is, and frankly, you could have extended the hilarity by cutting the flash off at "no i didn't". with the addition of marios mama mia, it kinda took a turn towards sad. but comedy is a learning game. and so as you go toward your next flash, take this into consideration and know that, less is more in some cases.
Why the heck would you pick THIS strip of VG Cats? Not to mention you can't voice act to save your life. I think I'll stick with the VG Cats Adaptation with no name, because i seriously doubt VG Cats can or should be animated and still have the same kind of humor.
When i see reviews like this, i tend to click the username and check to see if that person has submitted any work (be it audio or flash) and since you haven't a thing to show, your point is mostly invalid.