This is Great!
For a first attempt this is awesome. loved the music and really wish I knew what this is all about. NWO! I love the guys screaming "we don"t want you Here!"
Muffled audio is muffled.
You need to do something about the audio, it's really muffled.
Also, may I suggest you take the credits and out them at the end of the video? Credits belong either at the end or beginning of something, no where else. Wouldn't it bother you if you were watching a movie and there were random credits through it? Even if they were at the bottom of the screen.