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The Firebird:New Edition

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rated 2.31 / 5 stars
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Adventure - Point 'n Click
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Apr 18, 2011 | 1:40 PM EDT

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Author Comments

The story has been copyed from
http://chooseyourstory.co m/Story/The_Firebird.aspx
Still i give him FULL credit to it.

The submission,on your friend Kongregate has been rejected..but toke a lot of work for me!

Please make constructive criticism..and uncostructive enjoyment! [What? Is that even english?]

Just play the game! Enjoy!

Reviews


SuperSapitoSuperSapito

Rated 1 / 5 stars

If I had to wrap this up in three or less words, it would have been "COOL STORY BRO".

Speaking of, the story is the only thing that is actually okay. The rest of the presentation is pretty pointless/garbagey.

1- There's few to no point in choices other than progressing the story or getting a quickly-revertable game over. As in, the game keeps forcing a path to the player. This is a "suicidal mechanic" on interactive fiction and visual novels. True, it has 2 types of ending (other than game overs), but also true that they are 2 clicks apart from each other - literally.

2- Font and colors (which comprise about 97% of the game) are poorly chosen. Instructions/credits have RED text over RED background. Are you serious?

3- Images (the other 3%, or so) are quite irrelevant. Not bad though. WIsh they could have an actual role other than pointless decoration. They also seem to be poorly cropped/resized. Ideally, every screen should have his own background image, to give a better ambiance and serve the small purpose of locating the player into the story.

(in short: The red background sux)

4- No sound or music whatsoever. better than trash soundwaves, which, I think, would have been picked by you (given the rest of the game).

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So, 1 star for the story/plot. Nothing else. This was a great disappointment



sisima70sisima70

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Good one



ClockworkMan13ClockworkMan13

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Good story, but. . .

I like these kind of interactive stories, and this story in particular is good. But I would really like to see more artwork. Maybe some light background music, to set the mood.