please make your animation smoother!
soo.... when my music starts, the dog gets on little red riding hood girl and starts wanking off. If that's not enough, the dog keeps waking off even when she stands up. LOLWTF?! btw, I told you before, but who cares if you want to make the clouds look "realistic" (they don't even look realistic) but the clouds that all people want to see are nice, puffy and fade. I don't like looking at clouds with those freaking RAZOR SHARP edges. Dude, it looks like you can stab somebody with one of those clouds and kill em.
I liked it man, it's just the art you need to work on .=.
As with any of my free advice, it's usually worth what you pay for it. However, I liked this. The story is a great concept and I thought the action and the score were combined in an effective way. There could be advantages in making it much shorter, for one thing, it would give you more time to iron out the technical issues you are having with Flash. Another thing you may want to do is to develop the characters more by adding details to their faces. For example, giving the puppy eyes with moving pupils would allow you to create a character that is more alive without adding greatly to the animation workload.
I look forward to the next one.
thanks ill defenetly will try doing that on my next flash :3
Current Score: 2.40 / 5.00 (+ 0.039)
Didn't really understand most of it, but it was pretty fun to watch. Like some other reviews said, some parts were a little longer than they should have been, and it should have had some sound effects. But it's pretty nice overall. Especially for a second flash.
k ill try and make other flash cartoons shorter (on really long parts)
Hahaha wonderful concept
Great idea, the only issue (aside from the amateur animation) was some parts lasted a bit longer than they should. Like the dog coming out of the water. You could also use some sound effects. Findsounds dot com has some nice ones for freeee
tanks for the link :3
This was pretty good :D
There was a little bit of a background story, the plot was great, i noticed some dbz in there xD i liked it! I'm gonna give you an 8 because I havent seen something that well plotted here on newgrounds in a while :P Just work on your animation skills and making some of the scenes less drawn out and you're good!
tanks i did take a few weeks to come up with the story