The theme is great with its underlying message but at first it seems a bit strange. I really believed there's some things you might need to clarify due to the vagueness but over all it was a good one :) although i have a feeling its slightly over-rated.
At first I was like :D
Then I was like :|
Am I weird?
That got me hard. Even the devouring O.o
if the lines were cleaned up, and color was added, would it make it more fearful? but, it was done well, the audio just needed to be tweaked to be a bit sharper, and on cue.
over all, very good.