Ok, it's a pretty nice Mario clone. It took me a while to get used to jumping as physics in the game felt a bit weird. There were some bugs:

I got to about the stage with the green pipes and seemingly had nowhere to go and jumped down. Then the music started again and I appeared on some oak colored tubing. I probably should have died, but my health was still the same and I had my 130+ coins still with me.

I kept playing and went up some tubes. Then I fell down again and suddenly I was in a limbo with some purple tubes. I was going up and down, not quite getting up from between them but not falling either. I hope you can fix those bugs and it would be a mildly entertaining game. :)

Graphics: 4

The art looks simple like not much work has been put into it but as a platformer, it really doesn't matter that much.

Sound: 3

There's just one loop stolen from some Mario Bros. game.

Violence: 2

There really isn't any violence, except that the rock-like enemies look angry and the portal looks like a circ saw.

Interactivity: 7

Duh, it's a platformer, I have to interact all the time! Only thing I hoped for was some button other than moving that did something.

Humor: 6

I was mildly amused by the simple graphics and gameplay. It's nice that someone dares to try old things to make something new.

Overall: 6

It's a simple game that can be played straight away, no reading instructions required.

antihero1317

shut up its his first game

hmmm...

pretty OK, actually. i mean, it's your first game, and for that, it's pretty good. the music is nice, even though i hear it a lot, and it can be challenging at times.
although the main character, lui, should be explained more in the sequel... if there ever will be one.

uhh ok . . .

well you need to slow down enemys . . .

NICE REVIEW!!!

Ok the music is actually neat, the game if it's your first is a good start, need to slow down the enemies and have a better portal that doesn't look like a saw blade. Also since someone else said the music was bad try to focus on the music for different themes. First Priority though is slow down the enemies, then get some health packs or hearts or something to replenish your health.