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gray wolf fire:the team

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rated 1.68 / 5 stars
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Uploaded
Apr 2, 2011 | 6:45 PM EDT

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the end is at the start and at the end.(if you know what i mean)

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HoundByteHoundByte

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

This is better

this is certainly better than your other videos. keep up the good the good work.
insecpt the guy getting puched in the crouch.



kpnhkpnh

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Fuck I wanted to be the first commenter oh well!

This is the greatest peace of film I've ever seen in all my days. Dude it's crazy awesome, the way to made it was so crazy awesome, it is like you've unlearned how to do Flash redefining the art to making New Ground videos, It was so good I watched it like 3 times in a row but the wicked part is I didn't even know that it restart those two time and didn't notice how it was at the beinging. "the end is at the start and at the end" it makes since. I'm making it my new saying. deeeeeepppp. I'm bout to water the rest of these flicks.

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kpnh



SquidbitSquidbit

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Story

It didn't seem to have any kind of plot other than the girl getting kidnapped, but somehow it summed up every RPG I've played where you fight by taking turns.
You should have added voices, or at least light background music for the rest.


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IceDragon64IceDragon64

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Hmm

There is quite a lot in this movie, but it is really hard to follow and needs sorting out. I almost want to bl@ it just to encourage you to make it the best you can.
It has a number of the basics:
action, sound, music, backgrounds, animation. It even has a couple of plan view camera angles-

It seems a shame to have all this work that almost completely fails. I don't want to be a downer on someone who has put quite a lot into this, but...

Are we supposed to know who these people are? If not, why not introduce them in such a way that we might care about the characters?

You really need to put in more sound sooner. The odd little sounds are poor. The attempt to get by without words doesn't work here, IMO and I am not sufficiently impressed by standard anime routines to enjoy the waving hair and angular faces.

You really need to have a STOP at the end and credits in the movie. Stop/replay is NOT difficult to do, its just a couple of lines of actionscript, really.

The visuals could be so easily improved with a bit of background. Try adding another layer here and there and, for example a little gradient shading the sky from darker to lighter towards the horizon. Take a look at the my art tut for some simple ideas and instructions to improve your flash- this could be SO much better.

Please do work on this, it has much potential.


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