cheddar for morality!!
good job on the plot, hoping that the next episodes would also be off the hook!!!
really nice message!
pretty awesome intro
it is a great animation and i do feel the same as bwcunningham sadly most newgrounders wouldnt be interested in this kinda thing, but got me it was sick, i really did dig the intro song
The flash was great. But dont bother about what the guy below said. Newgrounds is a place for flashes, no matter who they are directed too. "Everything by Everyone"
But the advice he gave was solid for the most part. I think the length was perfect in fact. Cudos
you need to go die...
so your brilliance will be forever immortalized...
I feel deeply sorry for this flash... it is amazing. the story is so great!!! unfortunatel this is not a great fit for newgrounds. Many of the people who surf here are older and have already learned these lessons. there are a couple things that need work though...
1) The mouths didnt always sync with the voices.
2) If it is a childrens flash, watch the content... These days, beating your kids is tabuu, though the wig was funny, watch it a little bit. I came from the era of spankings, and i fully agree it breeds good chilluns, but not all parents do.
3) Longer!!! the bully bullying part went too fast, you need slightly longer of a story line.
you still get a 5/5 and a 10/10 from me, i loved this flash, and i see great potential in it. Great job!!!