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[L*] A day at the park

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Why Have You Made That... Anyway Good Start And The rest Its Just Umm I Not
gonna Say It But Its Dump But Its Also Fun To See Some people Making Fun Of Them
thanks ^3^ To Let Us be Ahahah At You

Still getting there

You all rarely submit anything here to the portal and when you do I get a good laugh since the intro looks completely great as always followed by a quick but sadly done following animation with just a few clip art Lucky Star characters. Could always add a background to them I guess to make them a little better I suppose. A picture of a park could have worked here too.

The intro is good as always. Liked how the intro here was a striped pink pattern. Considering you spent a good chunk of time working on the intro I simply have one question to ask. What happens between the intro and the main piece that just suddenly makes you give up the consistency of good quality here? I honestly would love to see a piece where you do good quality the full way. You got several users, why not do a full collab and just have each user try to contribute something awesome.

Have one person do the intro as always. Then have several of them work on the main animation, it goes a little slower but everyone works together to produce something incredible as a team like most collabs. I think you all have potential but something just happens or comes up that makes you lose the motivation.

The english subtitles were nice, it doesn't mean you can't have the japanese subtitles in there as well though. I'm sure it would be good practice for someone wishing to learn one or the other language anyways. The music was also pretty cool. What were the songs used here?

Overall, still improving which is good.

Um, great beginning.

The intro was great and then...it kinda fell flat. What happened? Did you borrow the intro from someone else and then tried to create something to go with it? It was a nice idea, but needs work.

Tsukasa-Hiiragi responds:

nope made it myself

Wonderful Simply Wonderful

Absolutely love it. Great job!

Well a few different problems I guess

Again, the opening is AWESOME! BUT it felt like name spam.
A few things about this in particular is A.) There is no voice acting when there should be (since you have "actors") and B.) There's no "park" it's just a white background =_=
Also when that....ninja? dude came out I completely lost track of what happened.

Again, GREAT potential, but please you just need to avoid laziness.