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Demon Tales Ep1 "Pilot"

rated 3.80 / 5 stars
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Mar 27, 2011 | 2:21 PM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place March 28, 2011

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First Episode of Demon Tales finally arived on Newgrounds.
I got to say. I had alot of setbacks in this project. Sound Sync problems.
Wich i managed to fix. But it made the project WAY to big..
Still trying to find a way to compress it though..

And for those who don't have the patience to watch this way to big flash version.

Youtube Link: tch?v=s9MwQuGNMhU



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

It seems like a good start to the series but...

I would add subtitles as well as maybe up the pace a little for some scenes. I am guessing this is designed to be a supernatural survival story so it would be good to add pacing as well as abrupt mood breakers to throw the viewer off guard (such as something stupid happening every once in a while like the main character tripping?)


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

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i would put some subtitles

and for a wierd reason, this makes me wanna play Soul Nomad o.O


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Potential for Awesome

The animation could use a little work, and the voice acting wasn't always clear or convincing. The plot was a rocky, with all of the characters having no explanation as to their abilities, backgrounds and such. For example, I thought the main character was just an average Joe, right up until he jumped off of that tower balcony and the demon person started spewing stuff about his potential. And on that, I thought that all of the characters were normal humans, and didn't realize they weren't until the executioner tried to hadouken the demon guy in the face. I call him "the demon guy" because his role here isn't really explained, and like all of the other characters, he has a name. Finally, you need to better explain where they are, and what's going on.

Overall, this needs some love. However if you stick with it, this could be really great.

Jochio responds:

I know alot isn't clear at this point!
That was my intention. The idea was to do character development while telling the story!
This is just the beginning, i was aiming for an unclear start!
The powers will be explained and the demon aswell!
Thnx for the review! I'll be sure to keep these things in mind!


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Very good voice overs!

I think you did really good with the voice overs on this, how ever i think you could have put abit more expression in the characters when they are talking. Other than that its pretty sweet!

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Rated 3 / 5 stars


a nice try - its flows weirdly though and is a bit confusing -- i think some better music and sfx usage could have really taken this to the next level

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Jochio responds:

Yea, I know it was hard to follow, Episode 2 is gonna be better though.
It'll be a bit more understandable then, thanks for the review!