Getting Better

You're getting better my friend

2.53 / 5.00 (+ 0.068)

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The animations should be smoother. There should be a normal story line. I only give 4 because the ending was pretty funny and at least you tried... Keep animating and you'll get better.

Difficult to understand.

I found the movie hard to comprehend - what was the plot in all of this and was it leading anywhere in particular? Also animation could be better by making it a little smoother in places. The sound effects were also, sadly, annoying. The scribble noise you heard for when the stickmen talked grated my eardrums and led me to ask why dubbing wasn't involved.

Some improvements to be made yet keep up the work!

Food for thought

You should have had an empty brass shoot from the chamber instead of a live round with the lead still there that and the cartridge you used to portray the bullet was that of a rifle round not something that would be used in a pistol.