I was expecting this to be silly or just some kind of shitpost, so I was a bit disappointed to see this. Maybe make it more funny by adding random goofs about Mary Sue characters or play some music in the background.
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Made with EDWARD Engine
http://edward.sophiehould en.com/
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Ok, I know this game sucks, it's main purpose is to practice flash art and animation :P
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Levels available in demo:
-Tutorial Grounds
-Graveyard
-Labyrinth
-Entrance
In the labyrinth level, theres a passage in the middle, press action to proceed
or else !
it has a lot of potential
it is of course only a demo and thus, it's kind of short. I found this game quite amusing though. looking at this, as well as your other creations, I'd definitely say you have talent.