LOL, just LOL!
Wow. Deep down I knew this would make it. I didn't write a review in case people had the good sense to blam something that deserved it. But now it looks like I have the chance to throw my two cents in. YAY!
I want to start by saying not to take this review to seriously. You sounded a bit suicidy and I don't want blood on your hands because you can't take criticism. I am an honest and impartial judge which means I'm already a horrible human being. Soooo, don't sewercide.
Now that the disclaimer is out of the way, this cartoon was so bad I laughed my ass off. It's like King of the Hill found a dictionary and a thesaurus and did a quick scan for some words to use after a break up. Ya know, to sound poetry n' shit. (That last line was a lesson I took from you minus the word fuck.) The best way I could sum this up would be 'meaningful trailer park trash'.
Having said that, I'm not saying you can't do better. I'm not saying I could do better. I'm saying this one piece is crap on a stick.
The animation wasn't so bad. It could have been drawn better, but hey, no one starts out great. Given the mood of the cartoon and the tone of the narration, I thought the animation was pretty close. I doubt any part of it was symbolic in any way though. By symbolic I refer to the head of the man on the couch that was void of color. One could argue that it was symbolic of how empty he felt, but this isn't the case is it? Be honest now. If you can go fill the head in. It looks silly without color.
The writing is where most of the laughs came from. Specifically, "Her beauty could never be FUCKIN' MATCHED I TELL YOU WUT." That line cracks me up every time I hear it. It's like a hick stoner tried to be Shakespearean. I'm not saying that 'fuck' is a bad word, but you used it rather poorly. 'Fuck' did not need to be in nearly every sentence. If you use those words in the everyday more than called for, chances are you need a greater vocabulary. We use a complex language that displays several degrees of depth and strength. Use it to a greater and fuller extent. I say this because I tried being pseudo intelligent by using the words 'taint' and 'fathom'; just two examples. If you are going, I'm sure you weren't but 'if' you were, for the trailer park hurt, words such as 'taint' and 'fathom' are not appropriate for the scene. If you read some 'American Splendor' by Harvey Pekar you'd know what I mean. It was the quality of American Splendor without actually having splendor. (Ironic considering)
Overall, I don't feel sad or moved by this at all. (Granted I am a fairly desensitized person.) There are far better and far more artistic ways to convey this pain. Even just changing a few words would be better. I came up with this by mistake when trying to quote you: "She had a beauty that could never...." By changing these words around you put emphasis on the past and greater feeling that the relationship is indeed over. You might need a writer, but I suggest you start reading classic literature.
You can do worse than this, but you would have to want. You can only go up from here.
Good luck.