really good especially for your first real attempt
This was relatively well done. far better than most of what comes through the portal certainly.
kudos to you my friend ^.^
I love the story so far. The voicing is okay, sometimes it sounds strange. The art is alright. You could really get me hooked if you freshened up your art work. Good job overall.
This is pretty good. I definately like the backround when it was night time.
"Not to shabby"
This is a pretty good story... I like how you used the powers of Gambit, Night Crawler, and Cyclops from X-Men. They are my favorite. Haha.
3/5 for the drawing and 5/5 for the story. Hope you continue making this series and improve your drawing skills, i know we have to start somewhere (and you just got started) you're doing a good job so far.