Wow, a real story!
Week after week I watch portal entries that are 10 second animation loops, or 30 second animated shorts. Sadly, it's the 30 second shorts that get top honors of the day. I don't even care what the story is here, the fact that it's over 30 seconds is reason enough to give it a 10. Also, it is actually a cool story.
Good work man
Can see you put a lot of effort into this, really well written and quite funny in parts.. Actually lol'd at "spooky".
Good work man keep it up
How did you compress such a long movie to merely 8.3 mb? It's a great story, that's fer true. The art isn't as bad as I was expecting to be completely honest. And what you lacked aesthetically you more than made up for in content. The sound was good quality and apparently compressed efficiently.
I love the story very Harry Dresden-ish.I love law enforcement and magic so I'm hooked.
For your first animation, this is a great start! The animation itself is a bit shaky and kind of looks like you did it in MS Paint, but the story made it worth watching! Hoping for a whole series in the future!