average work

Usually I like your stuff but this one is very strange work. Just one big scene, too long and boring, plus it's lagged all the time. I noticed here neither the animation skills nor the adequate plot, but I know You can do better both. And I really wonder why you uploaded exactly this work. You have the many others, that's more better than this is, The Creator for example. I'd uploaded that one.
As for this flash, I even don't know what to say, no impressions/emotions left after watching this. It's not bad, but not good too. I gave you 3/7 for it.
In addition, there always are problems with sound in your works. When wiil you set it right already?

You have potential

Submitting a flash in russian on NG is not a great idea, it will probably cost a lot of points.

But at least you've made subtitles, so I guess it's okay.

The flash quality is mediocre, I don't mind this kind of animation. But the story lacked any real reason or humor so... Yeah, 6/10, only for Manowar in the beginning :P.

Maybe you should try to find someone to help you brainstorming the plot to make it more interesting next time?