I thought he was going to grab her, but what happened instead was hilarious
Now that was .......... beyond brilliant. The ending took me by complete suprise and was perfect. I hope to see more from you in the future.
At first, when she was standing out the airplane, I thought she was going to jump....and then after I realized what had happened, the climax was building up...building up...and then came the hilarious part: the anticlimax. Made me laugh, especially the expression on her face.
You sir, made my day :)